Thesis statement-(or at least a good attempt)

Hello to Everyone,
I am somewhat of a critical thinker. I decide what needs to be done, how to do it, and then I jump in (both feet). I'm not saying that it is always the correct way to do something but, for me it seems to be the only way. I seem to contemplate on many aspects however, I seem to do what I set out to accomplish.

My thesis statement is always the most difficult part of any paper., I suppose it is because I just think about questions and write, rather than researching and putting information down. I shall attempt to write my thesis statement for our final project: Please, let me know what you think of it.

There are many disappointments when diagnosed with a muscular ailment. Some of these diseases may be treated after years of there first findings. Some may be life threatening and no known cause nor treatment. Others may have devastating results and become worse. Arthrogryposis is one such disorder that may result in death for infants, Multiple Sclerosis may become progressively worse, and Muscular dystrophy, devastating from the very beginning. In an attempt to clarify some of the truths and falsely commented approaches this paper will hopefully shed some light on this matter.

Maddie